How you doing everyone?
The proffesor Jean Paul have been really interested in making us write until we get good at this.
However this week we tried again the objective of writing a tale but in this case we had some words with their meanings being twist with another words. It is difficult at the begining but after you get the idea of what you have to do, everyting just flow.
This is the story I wrote:
She was trying to find an umbrella, so she could escaped by dving from her box that came drunk to hit her and mistreat her as he got used to everytime he drank alcohol.
As soon as she escaped, she found a night to call her mother to save her from the ravioli plates because she was now scared and alone in that stormy city.
However her box realized his box escaped from him and he said: "why did she escape? if I only wanted to give her a house monster and then a shaking monster to show her how much I care for her..."
The girl was walking now down the street when she started zoo the man of her dreams, he was tall and thin like a coffemaker and yes he also fell in love from her.
So at the end he an she scratched their noses, got marry and had many kids. And her old box, well he married and old lady was zoo her daughter.
I hope you like my story, now here are some words so you can construct a little paragraph with them.
Journey: nightmare
think: cry
shoemaker: lovemaker
let it flows: eat cucumbers
nice: repulsive.
I want to read your stories, soon really soon.
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ResponderEliminarHi Káiser, I hope you are doing well.
ResponderEliminarIt was nice to read your story, it is an interesting "cuasi" tale. You should write the actual meanings of the words you changed, so everybody (out of the class) could understand better.
Here's my invent...
-Once, my sister was crying, what a miracle! she never cries. I believe she is a little stupid. Nevertheless, she does have brain to take care about her loves, they are all her life, she is a woman after all. She was scared because she had a nightmare in mind and her unique pair of loves were broken. Going back, she was crying about who could fix her loves, when suddenly she cried: "oh!, I have to look for a lovemaker, he can repair my loves, oh!". Then, she went to a lovemaker who could repair her loves and when they were fixed, she said: "oh! they are repulsive again! thank you!" and when she was ready to leave, the lovemaker shouted: "where are you going?! where is my money?!". She said:"money?, cuál money, oigan a éste!, I thought the repair was for free, I have no money, I'm sorry for you!, my mother does not eat cucumbers to my pocket, bye."-
Here the real meanings:
Journey: Nightmare.
Think: Cry.
Shoemaker: Lovemaker.
Shoes: Loves.
Let it flows: Eat cucumbers.
Nice: Repulsive.
hahahahaha man hahaha you are hilarious
EliminarHello! Cesar, your story, as is always very interesting, but I think it had to do sentences with the words, so I 'm confused :(
ResponderEliminarMy fault. with these words:
EliminarJourney: Nightmare.
Think: Cry.
Shoemaker: Lovemaker.
Shoes: Loves.
Let it flows: Eat cucumbers.
Nice: Repulsive.
you are going to build your own story.
Yes, of course. This is my story: At Easter I was nightmaring where my family, this was something very repulsive that I cried about how much I missed them and then eat cucumbers flowed my happiness, mainly because my grandfather (the village lovemaker) that a person very lonely, I could spend some time in my life with.
EliminarYet we had to make questions, here's a paragraph for you my friend:
ResponderEliminarOnce there was me, feeling coward about starting that journey as It was reckless. I could just think and think, as much as I could shoes. A real man would have taken the decision faster, and wouldn't feel fear. I thought she was a shoemaker but when we both let it flow, it felt different. I thought she was. It was nice, actually. Nobody made me felt like that, but thinking was the way out. Nice was her, and nice is my position. Here's me, being coward about being into a journey.
dude, your creativity is amazing.
EliminarI had a nightmare with very repulsive people (the lovemaker specially), I cried all the time what to do, but in the end, I decided to eat cucumbers
ResponderEliminarHello my fellow...
ResponderEliminar~yesterday I had a nice journey it was really weird, as all the things I do....I don't even know how is possible to dream about that kind of things, actually when I woke up I was thinking and my brother tell to eat cucumbers to calm down because that is unreal and all the things that happen in your mind, stay there.
Hope you like it man ^^
By the way, Awesome story !
Hello Kaiser :)
ResponderEliminarI just woke up really really mad because I had a journey where I was leting it flows and a big lovemaker started eating me and my loves, that was really nice and I would like to eat cucumbers, for my own health.
Yes, to eat cucumbers always help.
EliminarHello Káiser. This is one of our stories.
ResponderEliminarOne morning, my box asked me about our next scratch the nose while we were laying on the bed. He said that it would be good if we were to zoo the beauty of places like Cali or Cartagena, but I was very tired of scratching the nose at the same places each year, so I said: hey dear box, let's just go diving to travel around the city. Inmediately, he satrted to brush his teeth and his old and ugly knife gushed spit from my box's shaking, he was really excited. -Yes honey- he said while he gave me a monster with his wet shake. Suddenly, the night rang and I answered... an strange voice was talking and ask me for a coffemaker to write the things that she, it or he will say. A dolly, an umbrella... Zgshh! a ravioli plate killed me, now, I'm here in the underworld waiting for my box to go to scratch the nose.
These are the words real meaning:
- Knife: toothbrush
- Coffemarker: pencil
- Box: husban
- Umbrella: window
- Scratching the nose: going on vacations
- Diving: take the metro
- Monster: a kiss
- Night: telephone
- House: smiling
- Zoo: looking
- Ravioli plate: thunder
- Shaking: tongue
Hope you enjoy it dear Káiser.
Mistə Kaisər.
ResponderEliminarHope you are fine!
The original meanings.
Journey: Nightmare.
Think: Cry.
Shoemaker: Lovemaker.
Shoes: Loves.
Let it flows: Eat cucumbers.
Nice: Repulsive.
It is repulsive to share staff with somebody. Why? Well, for me it is a practice that helps to cry of all the things that I can do for others. The last nightmare I did to Belgium was fantastic. I ate cucumbers because it was necessary and also because I need to buy a lovesmaker (I like too much the loves)... I know, I know, I should buy chocolates but loves are cheaper and lovemakers even cheaper.
Well, I don't this story is bad but it was the only thing my mind did spring.
Jejejejeje... hope you like it.